Đề bài:

Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even banned. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Dàn bài:

I. Introduction: Bee rephrase lại topic, và Bee sẽ đưa ra position 50/50 tùy vào từng trường hợp.

II. Body 1: positive lifestyles và success stories nên được chia sẻ rộng rải.
Sau đó Bee sẽ lần lượt develop 2 main ideas này.
a. promoting eco-friendly lifestyles --> inspiring and encouraging ordinary individuals to adopt sustainable practices --> fostering admiration and providing role models for the public
b. sharing success stories of prominent figures --> empowering individuals from all walks of life to pursue their dreams and goals --> instilling a belief in their own potential and abilities

III. Body 2: Một vài aspects của người nổi tiếng như à personal relationships nên được bảo vệ

a. Diveroce: the detrimental impact of excessive media intrusion on intimate details --> emotional struggles and sensitive issues involved in divorce cases

b. Romance: keeping romantic relationships away from the public eye --> importance of preserving the well-being and emotional health of all parties involved

IV. Conclusion

Bee nhắc lại quan điểm của mình: promoting media coverage for positive contributions while protecting personal privacy

Bài mẫu:

Opinions are divided whether it is acceptable for media outlets to disclose the privacy of celebrities or whether a ban should be imposed on this practice. I believe that both perspectives have their own distinct merits, and the decision depends on the nature of the information being published.

Promoting unrestricted media coverage is warranted for public figures who positively contribute to society through their lifestyles and success stories. With regard to the former, publicly sharing and praising the eco-friendly lifestyles of famous individuals can inspire and encourage ordinary individuals to adopt sustainable practices. This is because when their lifestyles are publicly displayed and celebrated, it fosters admiration and provides role models, making sustainable practices more attractive and achievable for ordinary individuals, thereby increasing the likelihood of their adoption. Added to the environmentally friendly lifestyles are the success stories of prominent figures who have overcome challenges and achieved greatness can become relatable role models for ordinary people. By sharing these success stories, the media can empower individuals from all walks of life to pursue their dreams and goals, instilling a belief in their own potential and abilities.

However, although the socially beneficial impacts of public figures should receive public attention, as seen above, there are other aspects of their lives should be entitled to personal privacy as far as their personal relationships are concerned. The the intimate details of celebrities’ relationships should be protected from excessive media intrusion. A typical example of this is when a high-profile celebrity goes through a divorce, it should not be subject to public scrutiny since it involves emotional struggles and sensitive issues that can be detrimental to both the individuals involved and their families. A further example is a movie star’s romantic relationships should be kept away from the public eye to protect the privacy. Despite public curiosity, respecting the private aspects of their relationships is essential to preserve the well-being and emotional health of all parties involved, as constant media attention can put strain on the relationship and lead to unnecessary intrusions into their personal lives.

In conclusion, promoting unlimited media exposure for public figures who positively impact society through their sustainable practices and journeys to accomplishments can offer considerable benefits. However, others, such as their personal relationships, should be granted the right to privacy.

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